tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post1442611332706046281..comments2023-09-10T04:53:56.259-07:00Comments on Summer Haiku 2007: Alisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07005806387830212175noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post-74639090232953867822007-07-22T19:29:00.000-07:002007-07-22T19:29:00.000-07:00Interesting inversion on clouds as rags.Interesting inversion on clouds as rags.Pearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05251168248457758117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post-57335736023582189172007-07-19T06:46:00.000-07:002007-07-19T06:46:00.000-07:00.I really like that line rags of blue skyIt's orig....<BR/><BR/>I really like that line <BR/><I>rags of blue sky</I><BR/><BR/>It's original, and I feel it's strong enough to be an unusual first line for the poem! ;-)<BR/><BR/>.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com