tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post254741729738457696..comments2023-09-10T04:53:56.259-07:00Comments on Summer Haiku 2007: Alisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07005806387830212175noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post-38120349811863203332007-06-07T13:48:00.000-07:002007-06-07T13:48:00.000-07:00perfect! beautiful haiku.perfect! beautiful haiku.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post-22603049235068910702007-05-30T10:23:00.000-07:002007-05-30T10:23:00.000-07:00sweet! how vivid and true.sweet! how vivid and true.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post-63688254076737814352007-05-25T05:25:00.000-07:002007-05-25T05:25:00.000-07:00I really like this! It does have an abundence of ...I really like this! <BR/><BR/>It does have an abundence of <I>ings</I> which is unfortunate, but I can't see how it could be avoided.<BR/><BR/>I absolutely love that gorgeous middle line!<BR/><BR/><BR/><I>folding in earthworms</I><BR/><BR/><BR/>That is really a truly magic line, full of immediacy and texture, I can feel the earth through my fingers!<BR/><BR/><BR/>.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com