tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post9123066013172711153..comments2023-09-10T04:53:56.259-07:00Comments on Summer Haiku 2007: Alisonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07005806387830212175noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post-34543612274322647172007-08-15T21:50:00.000-07:002007-08-15T21:50:00.000-07:00oh yeah. very nice.oh yeah. very nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post-66726041254251902792007-08-09T10:07:00.000-07:002007-08-09T10:07:00.000-07:00Great stuff. Sometimes the silent slow moments ho...Great stuff. Sometimes the silent slow moments hold the most power.jemhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08181038873568527264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post-9862406077777476162007-08-09T09:23:00.000-07:002007-08-09T09:23:00.000-07:00Sweet and evocativeSweet and evocativeShelleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08861427053408203618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post-50554337523861005142007-08-07T13:01:00.000-07:002007-08-07T13:01:00.000-07:00Many thanks Alan and PearlMany thanks Alan and PearlDamien Gabrielshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17135649412210072485noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post-82330041826522887152007-08-07T06:07:00.000-07:002007-08-07T06:07:00.000-07:00lovely gentle moment.lovely gentle moment.Pearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05251168248457758117noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post-73446571608468416222007-08-07T05:55:00.000-07:002007-08-07T05:55:00.000-07:00Bonjour Damien,My first post went in before I coul...Bonjour Damien,<BR/><BR/>My first post went in before I could edit it.<BR/><BR/>Love your stone bench haiku, of course! ;-)<BR/><BR/>It is so well done, with interesting syntax, that I don't even think you need the dash.<BR/><BR/><I>stone bench<BR/>the snail gives up to me<BR/>the other half</I><BR/><BR/>.Area 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8850478732283242286.post-21471905954385960002007-08-07T03:17:00.000-07:002007-08-07T03:17:00.000-07:001 a.m. clifton villagetaxi rank alonethree snails ...1 a.m. clifton village<BR/>taxi rank alone<BR/>three snails share the bench<BR/>Blithe Spirit October 2002 BBC Radio BristolArea 17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07472190637554124160noreply@blogger.com