Thursday, May 24, 2007

morning gardening
folding in earthworms
with the annuals


Alan Summers said...

I really like this!

It does have an abundence of ings which is unfortunate, but I can't see how it could be avoided.

I absolutely love that gorgeous middle line!

folding in earthworms

That is really a truly magic line, full of immediacy and texture, I can feel the earth through my fingers!


Pearl said...

sweet! how vivid and true.

littlepurplecow said...

Nice one!

cat said...

perfect! beautiful haiku.