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3 comments:
I really like this!
It does have an abundence of ings which is unfortunate, but I can't see how it could be avoided.
I absolutely love that gorgeous middle line!
folding in earthworms
That is really a truly magic line, full of immediacy and texture, I can feel the earth through my fingers!
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sweet! how vivid and true.
perfect! beautiful haiku.
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