Wednesday, June 13, 2007

a morning
of puddles -
repeating everything


Roswila said...

Nice! Had too many of those days recently. :-)

Alan Summers said...

A very compact haiku, I really like this!

And I really like puddle haiku and repeat haiku too. ;-)

in a polka dot dress
a child repeats everything
on the train

Snapshot Two, U.K. 1998

the only puddle I see
a kid in it

HI, Japan, 2005

Shelley said...

It's raining here, and I'm enjoying this haiku with your rain in it.

Shelley said...

Or, alternately:

it's raining here --
reading your puddle haiku