Tuesday, June 26, 2007

HOT PAIRS

hand-in-hand sweethearts
umbrella as parasol
summer stroll

glaring sunlight
my shadow leads
the way

2 comments:

jem said...

These are both great. There is a strong sense of love in the first, as for the second, I am drawn to all shadow haiku.

Roswila said...

Thanks, Jem. Does any sense of my "shadow" envy of the first couple come through at all in the second? (BTW, I wrote them to stand alone, and only later reazlied they can also be a pair.)