Tuesday, July 17, 2007

afternoon sun


afternoon sun
wet feet follow
the tide line


photo: steve glossin
words:
mandy smith

5 comments:

jem said...

This is great. I feel like I can almost follow the person, their journey, their thoughts.

Steve G said...

Your words go well with the photo.

Alan Summers said...

I agree with both of you!

Choosing wet feet rather than (wet) footprints really opens the haiku up in my opinion.

A really good haiku and photo relationship here!

Clare said...

Really beautiful! I really like the feeling you created of sun and wet feet and the tide -- I can totally smell the salt air!!
:)

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

Together, you recreated a mood I have experienced at the beach many times and miss out here.