Tuesday, July 17, 2007

afternoon sun

afternoon sun
wet feet follow
the tide line

photo: steve glossin
mandy smith


jem said...

This is great. I feel like I can almost follow the person, their journey, their thoughts.

Anonymous said...

Your words go well with the photo.

Alan Summers said...

I agree with both of you!

Choosing wet feet rather than (wet) footprints really opens the haiku up in my opinion.

A really good haiku and photo relationship here!

Clare said...

Really beautiful! I really like the feeling you created of sun and wet feet and the tide -- I can totally smell the salt air!!

Marcia (MeeAugraphie) said...

Together, you recreated a mood I have experienced at the beach many times and miss out here.