Thursday, July 26, 2007

windless night —
a cloud of gnats
all around me

3 comments:

jem said...

I like the weathery link between your use of the words 'windless' and 'cloud' - its well tied together and strong for that.

Alan Summers said...

Your round? ;-) [pub drinks]

But ouch, reminds me of my sunrise bicycle rides in Queensland when I would have a dense black cloud of flies tightly packed around my head!

Gabriella the Great said...

I took my dogs out yesterday evening to do their business and I felt surrounded by gnats... I'm so with your poem of words...