However, just as it is, it evokes an experience I have here in New York City on occasion. I can still be surprised and moved by the voices of seagulls in my neighborhood!
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2 comments:
I really really like this John!
Would you consider thinking about changing the order of the lines, and using a bit of "haiku licence"? ;-)
gulls sitting
their songs of the sea
on city chimneys
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Like those suggestions, Alan.
However, just as it is, it evokes an experience I have here in New York City on occasion. I can still be surprised and moved by the voices of seagulls in my neighborhood!
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