Tuesday, July 10, 2007

on city chimneys
gulls sitting -
their songs of the sea

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I really really like this John!

Would you consider thinking about changing the order of the lines, and using a bit of "haiku licence"? ;-)

gulls sitting
their songs of the sea
on city chimneys


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Roswila said...

Like those suggestions, Alan.

However, just as it is, it evokes an experience I have here in New York City on occasion. I can still be surprised and moved by the voices of seagulls in my neighborhood!