Monday, July 23, 2007

silence shattered -
a snail underfoot
in the long grass

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Ouch!

Reminds me of my walks home in Bradford on Avon, with lotsa snails and slugs, and trying to avoid hurting them in the dim light.

Wonderful haiku.

I wonder if you change the first line around to read:


shattered silence-
a snail underfoot
in the long grass



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Mandy said...

There does seem to be more about this year.