Sunday, July 22, 2007

cool summer night —
I leave another voicemail
for my daughter

3 comments:

Area 17 said...

Hi Paul!

Great to see you here!!!!

Simple but evocative haiku, with just that subtle edge, leaving me wondering why another voicemail.

Wonderful.

Reihaisha said...

had a friend who had the sitch - she did realze she still needed him ;)

Area 17 said...

Thanks reihaisha, never knew situation to be boiled down to sitch! ;-)

Lets hope the "sitch" on the voicemail turned out okay.